Task Description: In room 5 we were learning to show not tell about out stories. I got a little mixed up and I have done this much work. Hopefully you enjoy reading my story.
I like this because you put all the stories together and made one big story. I think it would be a bit easier to read if they were seperate, but I really like it.
Questions: How long did this take you? How come you connected the stories? What are the dog and the cake gonna get crushed by?
Kia Ora Shane
ReplyDeleteI like this because you put all the stories together and made one big story. I think it would be a bit easier to read if they were seperate, but I really like it.
Questions:
How long did this take you?
How come you connected the stories?
What are the dog and the cake gonna get crushed by?
Bye Shane