I am a learner at Glen Taylor School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Room 5 and my teacher is Mrs Dhaliwal.
Hi ShaneI really like your writing because it has a great sense of humour. I did see a bit of mistakes in the writing but other than that it is great.Questions:How would you find a gun in a space ship!?Why would you kill the robbers?Bye Shane
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Hi Shane
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Questions:
How would you find a gun in a space ship!?
Why would you kill the robbers?
Bye Shane
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