For this task I had listen to a story and I had to writing what happen and also what it was about. Plus also create a mood and how I felt about the story. Hope you enjoy!
I like how you were able to describe the video you watched, it is a very funny description. I also like the part when the rat did a number 2 on the octopus. I think that the "looks like" could've been a bit longer and detailed but I like how you used personification in your writing.
Questions: How long did this take you? How did you think of this? How come you like the part when the rat poops on the octopus's head?
Kia Ora Shane
ReplyDeleteI like how you were able to describe the video you watched, it is a very funny description. I also like the part when the rat did a number 2 on the octopus. I think that the "looks like" could've been a bit longer and detailed but I like how you used personification in your writing.
Questions:
How long did this take you?
How did you think of this?
How come you like the part when the rat poops on the octopus's head?
Bye Shane